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kinza qasim's avatar

"Now I might finally learn to give

The joy in me a chance to live" ❤️❤️

Nessie's avatar

🙏 Beautiful.

I loved these parts:

“From me to you

I bare my core

So that you might see me more

Now you’ll know what I have carried

Coiled and twisted, deeply buried”

“The words, at last, they make it real

Give me a place to truly feel”

❤️‍🩹

Pa Modou's avatar

This is well written! I love the diction. It stick to the theme turning weakness into strength. Mostly I love the rhyme.